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Slipping Time


PaulLev
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  • 3 weeks later...
Intriguing story line! I'd be interested to see how the strong Eros component resonates with readers who identify as female and/ or nonbinary. I think my favorite line was this great metaphor - "ricocheting mirrors of memory". That really seemed to set a different flavor of time travel in my imagination. I think the story deserves development! And maybe even some promotional consideration from a certain bottled water company 😉
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